Season’s Alchemy
Pernicious cold seeps in passed frosted glass
winter knocking insolently at my door
pale luminous sun has autumn on the run
as Vitiligo shadow creeping ‘cross the lawn…
an allegory to seasons changing
winter persona stark against the skyline
nature’s epochal alchemy
turns warmth to winters’ bitter chill
shifting plates in perpetual motion
mist clinging ribbon-like to verdant hills.
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SharonleeGoodhand©28-May-14
PS Now don’t get me wrong… I love winter
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Plate- A rigid layer of the Earth’s crust that is believed to drift slowly
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great use of vitiligo…and natures epochal alchemy….nice turns of phrase with the words…ha i guess i like all seasons for their own reasons…i am glad it is summer though…i love the suns kiss…
Hi Brian… lovely to interact again.
This last summer was a harsh one, temps in the 40’s with high humidity.
I feel like I’ve been looking forward to winter for 10 months lol.
ooh, I love how you used plate, as in earth’s crust; and Vitiligo shadow creeping ‘cross the lawn… very creative…
Thank you Anthony… I enjoy putting a twist on words.
I am so glad its winter on my part of the world ~ The season changing though is very fascinating ~ Enjoyed your winter knocking on the door poem, smiles ~
I meant I am so glad its spring now ~
Many thanks Grace … been a long hot summer in Australia… I think I will enjoy winter.
Thank you for liking my WP blog but its not active right now.
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Hope to see more of you around the blogging communities ~
I like ‘an allegory to seasons changing.’ Though sometimes we like one season better than another, having four seasons helps us be appreciative of the changes, I think. Plus gives us something to talk (complain) about. Smiles.
Smiling true… and usually the end of one season we are yearning for the next!
Thank you for calling in.
I love this, the way you used the words is beautiful. It was a long winter here, and now I am glad to see the sun, our lives revolve around the shifting of the seasons, much more than we like to admit.
Hello Kelly… I can only agree there, the changing seasons are vital to the health of not only the Earth but every living thing on it. Thank you for stopping by.
” Vitiligo shadow creeping ‘cross the lawn” Can you hear me applauding? 🙂 Perfect
🙂 Thank you so much
A blessing to have the changing seasons .. I find it fascinating to read about the changes just when summer is upon in the north… I love the way you used the words.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts…
so you’re at home on the other side of the globe, heading toward winter… i can imagine that you’re looking forward to it when it’s been so hot… enjoy
Hi Claudia… we did have a sweltering summer, temps in the 40’s.
Lovely to see you again.
Oooh nice to feel winters chill so nicely written, if only…winter where I am has been like a humid summer this year…strange change in seasons for sure. Beautifully penned.
The seasons are certainly different to how they were 20 years ago. Is it that I am 20 years older?
Thank you for reading & commenting